Thinking ‘tanka’

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Day 11 of NaPoWriMo is the day of the tanka poem (syllable structure 5-7-5-7-7) and, on a day a little less inspiring than most, my poem is below… with a nice picture to help it along.

ImageSighs and lullabies

enchanted mind at moonrise

Soulful swirl of thoughts,

Fly free from broken bondage

hearts jig-sawed, puzzle complete.

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2 responses to “Thinking ‘tanka’

  1. “Sighs and lullabies” is my favorite line! Ahhh I’ve been there late at night rocking my babies back to sleep.

  2. Hi Natalie, many thanks for visiting! I think it’s quite a soothing, gentle line so I’m happy to hear that you like it. 🙂

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